[3rd *Starmember* Submission] The Bright Room

Honestly I love bright effects~

It's here ~ ..the 3rd submission for :iconrjace1014fanclub: starmember signup
Ohgod finally ..this took me way too long pffft haha nah ... it was only 10 months pfft pffft =w= /shot
I finally posted the 3rd submission ..after a lot of struggling I finally made it haha ;w;
yesterday I was so determined into finishing it I worked 5 hours straight on this with just a few and short breaks :') ..my hands were angry at me >w> ..

I can't wait to see the voting results >< ..aaah I hope I will pass ;u;/
Well I guess I won't complain too much about this drawing :I ..even though the only things I see on here are the flaws haha. Buut ..=RJAce1014 told me to stay positive about my drawings ..so I shall just shut up haha :'3
I still won't forgive myself for drawing the chair that badly, I still can't draw hands, Risaya has small shoulders kfsdl ..aand ..lool I gave her big feet too ..etc /shot.. I can't resist iiiit @3@

So yea I'll be honest I am definitely not happy with the turnout. Sadly Canary and Risaya don't quite fit the BG colors.. since it was more meant for my OC Mimi :U actually I'll be honest the Canasaya Duo don't fit with Mimi ;w; ..their color shemes differ too much ;w;'.. but I guess it's not as bad as I am seeing it.. (:I)/ .. uh I hope
Also the interaction between the characters in this drawing is rather low, well let's just keep it at the fact ..it's more like some kind of picture .o. rather than conversation moment or w/e :') ..I know it's boring though

Putting all the disappointing things aside I put a lot of effort in this drawing ;w;.. I'm still just kinda practicing I guess, so ofcourse it's not perfect :')

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Time worked on: Around 10 hours fdsjdsklf ..I am so slow .. but the struggling moments and redrawing some parts I managed to improve a little bit were also counted here ;w;
program: Paint Tool SAI
The Canasaya duo belong to: I do not own them
Mimi (the girl on the middle) belongs to: meh desu =w='

Also I'm enabling the critique, not because I think this turned out great, but because it might just help me doing a better job next time ><. I'm pretty sure a lot of flaws which I spot myself will be described but ohwell xD
So yea I am clearly looking for some kind of critique which will help me improve next time ;w;. So pls give me some tips haha, pls bare with me.. I put a lot of effort in this ;w; so not too negative yet I am not looking for someone who is just pointing out good stuff xD
to make things short: I would love a good balanced critique with tips on how I can do better next time ;w;.


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ohgod I should learn how to make my descriptions shorter